Tuesday, December 11, 2012

Yahan-wahan - Day 11 Blogging Marathon

Hum to iss pal hein yahan
Na jane hogein kal kahan
Subah kee dhundh mein sabhi
Kho jayengay sapne yahan

Tumhe dekh ke dil ne kaha
Chupa lun tumhe abhi yahan
Ya chor dun khuli waadiyon mein
Laut aane ko phir se yahan

Tham see gayi saans yun
Iss khayal se kee tum kahan
Khuli aankh se kuch yun dikhe
Kabhi tum nahin kabhi tum yahan

Yun dard se aankhen namm hue~in
Kuch gire yahan kuch chalke wahan
Yeh aas le kar jee chale
Sapne bhi honge sach yahan!

12 comments:

  1. I could use a little bit of translation :P
    From the way it rhymes, it looks well written but the language barrier!

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    1. Thanks alot Swathika. Sirisha did some translation for you below. I will try to do more. I am not very good with conveying emotions in poetry english.

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  2. We are here at this moment , Dont know where we will be in the next.
    All dreams will be lost in the morning mist.

    First para Translate for you @Swatika

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  3. Such a hopeful poem :) Keep them coming

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    1. Thanks a Pinksocks. Such lovely kind words keep me going...

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  4. You write so very well Bharti.

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    1. Thank you thank you AJ. I am delighted with the response :)

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  5. wow..lovely lines...you are an awesome poet, Bharti!

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    1. Thanks a a lot Uma. I am totally flattered with the lovely words. :)

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  6. indeed sapne sach honge for sure :) but we have to DREAM to make sure they do

    beautiful poem

    Bikram's

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    1. Thanks Bikram .
      Yes...Dream for dreams to come true :)

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