Friday, May 20, 2011

Unknown reasons - Post 16

That blue sky and that bright sun
temperatures soaring..
hearts beating

as she sits there
Gazing out of the window 
That secret gaze..
No more becoming 
the topic of laughter

It feels good
Today she is the point
a touch on that flying hair
and settling that shawl

Advise is flowing like waterfall
Talk sensible
And do not smile much
Sitting across from each other
a gaze is shared 
eyes meet 
she saw that smile vanishing

she sits there again
Near the window ...gazing outside
sky is dark
sun has set

Morning is far far away
She continues to be the laughing matter
what went wrong
Smiles only vanished
Talk never happened

© 2011 Life Begins. Please DO NOT COPY.


  1. I liek the line "advice flowing like a waterfall". I think it still does whenever my mom and me are together :P

  2. Beautiful lines. Loved reading it.

  3. lovely thoughts in the morning

  4. @SupMM : Thanks. And yes that advise somehow keeps flowing from all directions thoughout our life.

  5. @Margarita: Thanks a lot. That coming from you means a lot. You write so so so beautiful.


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